Here’s the current product page.
And here’s the page design that’s being proposed. Ignore the actual words in the text, and focus only on the look and feel. Also imagine that the fully justified 3 blocks of bold text are aligned left and right (I had trouble doing this in my image editing software).
Please let me know your criticisms of either the old or the new design.
Also, note that in the new design, “Instead of a coupon” has a capital “I”. It is important for me to know whether you think a lower case or upper case initial “I” is most appropriate.